missed a kiss

You take us,
to where pain,
is plain,
planned : ordained,
open expansive oceans,
calm : subtle change,
instead of my in sane,
an end, angered swiftly,
turns into dew-dropped rain,
cut stems, angled, ripped free,
you ripple through me,
our wild tamed,
I claim:
your peace : my ease,
you aim:
our dream : belief,
a piece of we,
seek me.

5 thoughts on “missed a kiss

  1. Excellent flow and use of adjectives to describe key elements throughout the poem. Once finished it demands reflection apart from the technique.


  2. Nice imagery and rhythm to this poem. Like wading slowly into a gently eddied ocean front. Nice work!


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